The Florida Spy - A Graphic Novel Page

This is where my writing + art life converge: the final assignment for my MATS Bootcamp 2018 was a GRAPHIC NOVEL page. Woah. I would NEVER have thought about attempting something like this, so this course has really stretched and challenged me in such a fun way.

This is the finished page:

The Florida Spy, Graphic Novel page illustration by Rebecca Johnstone/Dainty Dora

Set initially on Miami Beach, then moving swiftly (in 'le taxi'!) to the Everglades, it's a fun tale that I hope will make people smile as well as showing off my illustration skills.

First off, we were given an image of fun, random items to draw as a 'starter for ten', or rather, the 'mini' assignment. These items were:

A red toy camera

A yellow taxi toy

A vintage portrait of a dapper young man

A photograph of a lady with red hair in a green jumper with her dog

A postcard of a sunny beachscape

A toy shop dollar

A little blue table tennis racket

A ticket stub from a meat market

A plastic crocodile

A card with an image of two little dogs

Totally random!

The first image I drew was the dapper young man.

'Claude' illustration, Rebecca Johnstone/Dainty Dora

Already my mind started creating a 'story' for him and he become French. I called him Claude. I drew him in pencil and ended up leaving him like that; quite raw and sketchy. It's the first time I've drawn a moustache!

And of course I had to show him 'sniffing ze moneyz'!

'Claude' with jewels pencil illustration by Rebecca Johnstone

Next I tackled the 'lady with the red hair'. I drew her in watercolour pencil but never did add water. I loved working on her hair and adding texture and building up subtle layers of colour. In the original image her hair was the same as the dog's so I stuck with that. I quite like it?

Lady in Green, illustration, Rebecca Johnstone

Next, I tackled the crocodile who was really only a green plastic toy in the starter image, but already I'd had the idea for basing part of the story in the Floridian Everglades. With that in mind I decided to go for a 'real' crocodile who became: Monsieur Le Croc.

Monsieur Le Croc illustration for MATS Bootcamp 2018, Rebecca Johnstone

After that, the 'big assignment' had been released so I was masterminding the story and wondering where to really, properly....start.

So many ideas but how to draw them? How to contain everything to just one page?

Although the concept of a graphic novel involves a story, I knew that the art was the main focus of this class. Being a writer too however, I knew I really wanted to rock the story as well as the art. And be clever. And fun. And do it all. 

Yes, I'm someone who suffers from 'The Gap' syndrome Ira Glass so eloquently outlines in this video. The fabulousness in my head rarely ends up on the page, but maybe, maybe, I get to convey a little smidge of the excitement I see in my mind to the page. I hope so.

I used a combination of pencil sketching, the Procreate app on the iPad - particularly for the lettering - and then used Photoshop to stitch all the elements together. I particularly love 'BINGO' the dog detective. He looks so cute and harmless, but clearly he has a killer instinct for the truth (and a steady paw for working a camera...)

BINGO Dog Detective, Rebecca Johnstone

It would have been a LOT faster to just draw a page straight-off, but I had so many varying elements to juggle and I do love the tweaking stage. Working out where things should go and shifting things around, and then deciding I need another scene or a different scene or more words or new words.

This assignment taught me a lot.

Taxi illustration, Rebecca Johnstone/Dainty Dora

Le taxi...

A quick sketch done on the iPad using the Procreate app. I was quite resistant to iPad tech at first but since I discovered the possibilities, I haven't looked back. I love this looping image showing the various iterations of the image.

And I feel a lot more confident about my own handwriting which is a happy by-product of taking the MATS Bootcamp, and especially this assignment.

I've always shied away from using my own writing, preferring the crisp clarity of a typed font, but now I'm seeing the value and fun of using my own handwriting and I think it worked particularly well for this graphic novel page. 

Let me know what you think of this first foray into the graphic novel medium. Did you like the story? Does it make you want to see more?

The full class gallery will be live soon, and I'll at the link then :)